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| jackepstein 2007-06-12 ch 1,  | abusethis left something resounding in me being that i suffer from chronic pain and that's the way i feel about taking my pain drugs you wrote it out well i liked it :} -jack |
| Kenna-Kat11 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abuseinteresting...i would love to know how you came up with this...lol...anyway i liked it good job! ~E~ |
| kelsi bones 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI like the repitition of "Thump.../Thump...". It's almost like you can feel your own head pulsing as you read. Amazing. The imagery of the water carying the pill "like a boat in the river down your throat" is very good as well. Katt.xx |
| Charlotte Makepeace 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseVery weird, but i loved it! |