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| Cost 2007-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseMy thought is this. You tell us whats wrong, that a lifestyle of "dead living" isn't good, which I agree. I was hoping for an answer though, since humanity isn't one. Good thought, good writing. |
| Smoky Bear 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abusepretty much sums it up! well thought out poem and well put. |
| freewrit3r 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseNice, very true. I'm actually writing a dystopian short story about this subject, but it also includes other issues. |
| MR.SEAN 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abusethat really cool "dead living" never really thought of it liek that... cool! |
| sin olvido 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good poem that I highly enjoyed reading. I love how the first line sums up exactly what's going on today, and in one word, no less. "lifestyle of dead living" -- scarily true, and, really, the only way to describe it. "other's thoughts/other's words" -- I think you mean "others'" because you're talking about more than one "other." Great poem! ~Kira's Song |