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| Iced Tea Junkie 2008-06-29 ch 1,  | abuseYou should check out my story "How NOT To Write a Story"! |
| Purpose 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseSay what!? I would say Elves are pretty cool, but come on Dwarves are such awesome craftsmen. Of course then again I believe the Elves in the Hobbit made the swords that the Dwarfs used. Also I think you're refering to LotR elves, but if you ever read a book called 'The Divide' the elves are all puny little wimps that make their living through trickery and lies. Again as ever a very random very funny blurp. Especially the last line 'that no matter what, the elves will always win for one reason; they're too pretty to loose." |
| Chasing Life 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseELVES FOR THE WIN. |
| x day x dreamer x 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abusethis is so true. but everybody knows: NOODLES CONQUER ALL. NOODLES WILL RULE THE WORLD. |
| Beluga1 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abusei agree comppletely! elves r so much better, dwarves rn't too bad but elves rule! |
| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseGood point! But elves look more like women, so are you saying that women are better than men? 'Cause I concur! Write on! Pen.Dragon |
| TT-da-lamanite 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abusethis is wrong...but I'll let that slide, this brings up another matter, Can light sabers cut superman? And who would win in a fight. batman or Robin? |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuse=) Nice. Two notes: You don't mention why the dwarves are "done for" in the fifth paragraph but get back to the elves using bows a few paragraphs later. And "The dwarves all are dirty" should probably be, "The dwarves are all dirty" or "All the dwarves are dirty". Haha yeah, 'tis cute, though ^^ I like it, you're good at writing amusing little pieces. Moon's Poetess |
| Zephyr-wings 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI never dawdle on the subject before this but I guess you have a point. In fairy tales the prettiest ones always win. (although reality isn’t that better off either) |
| The Mumbling Sage 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseOnly problem is elf men look like women...maybe elves and dwarves are acutally two halves of the same species, elves are the girls and dwarves are the guys...but how would they ever mate? Only other problem: some they're and their confusion (think what would happen if your brother saw!), and you said loose instead of lose. Elves are too pretty to lose. Too pretty to loose is...another thing entirely. (back to what I said after 'What the Hell'- Is Matt P. just too pretty to lose?) :p :) |
| Lausell Morales 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseELVES ALL THE WAY, MAN! Woot-woot! Lol. Sorry, I have an elf fetish... Anyway, I liked this a ton. Your sarcasm helps it a lot, and, the scary part is, people fight on this stuff all the time... :-) Keep Writing! |