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| Death Unto Paperclips 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThis one's good, hon. Trust me, I know the feeling, feeling as though you've lost a friend. Very good. |
| Malignant Innocence 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abusewow i know u better then i thought i did its a great story u have a gift |
| Vesta J 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseaw. i like this. this is goin on my favs :) you're flow of writing doesn't bore the readers at all, keeps them reading til the end. i haven't read a story similar to this at all, so good job on originality, kept interest, and good topic. i kind of know the feeling. i've been dropped by my good friend, too once. but it's all good now, i have people i can talk to. so yup. no criticism here :D |