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Reviews For: Devil's Path

Shadowe Goddess 2008-04-16 ch 1,	abusedark, but not bad. i like...
simpleplan13 2007-09-04 ch 1,	abuseI like this.. it has powerful descriptions and I like how the title basically sums the whole thing up but wasnt a phrase used in the piece.. aweosme job
Claire 2007-06-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseLove it, and if I was logged in it would be in my favs... I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ARE GOING! Lol, I was crying my eyes out last night, Matt was so confused. I really don't want you to go for my own selfish reasons, but you better god damn get me something awesome for my birthday that I can cry at every time i see it and know that you are having the time of your life!
blacktearsof*innocence 2007-06-04 ch 1,	abusehey, thanks so much for the review!! that's alright, i've been bad with reviewing, too. i just have been way too busy and recently my computer was down for a while so i just got it back up and working a few days ago, so it's been crazy. so, anyways, i assure you, you have nothing to be worried about! everyone suffers from bouts of writers block! (i have had writers block for a while now, to tell you the truth and i'm getting sort of frustrated. i'm hoping to write something new soon and i really hope its good!) but, as regards to your newest work, "devil's path", i can safely say that you don't need to worry, you're still an awesome writer with alot of talent and talent is something you can't lose! i think it's just that you have lacked inspiration for a time and i believe that's my problem, too. but, as for your poem, i must be honest, it's not one of your best but it is still very good. i might have told you this before (forgive me if i haven't because i should have) but, not many people can get away with writing free verse and yet, you do an awesome job of it! usually, i can't really get into the feel of a poem if it is written in free verse but i never have that problem with yours! i say that takes a lot of skill so i give you a pat on the back! Anywho, i really like the feeling of this poem. it's dark and and it's sort of vengeful. like he's seeking revenge yet he's not quite sure how to get it. it's sort of like the future. the only thing you can make out is the darkness and the path you tread is unclear. i really like the last four lines. those stuck out to me the most. well done! so, anywho, wow, you got to see evanescence!? that's so awesome! i'm very jealous!! i can't believe you were able to spend time alone with her! i wish i could have been there!! was Amy nice?? i bet she was really friendly! i'm so happy for you, though. that's a once in a lifetime opportunity! well, keep up the good work and i'll try to post more stuff up soon. i don't mind your long reviews, i enjoy them! keep writing and always and forever! luv always, ~Davida
Echo's Voice 2007-06-03 ch 1,	abuseAfter I got your review I went to look at your stuff which is what I usually do. This reminded me so much of my own writing. You write things that sound like my thoughts. I hope that doesn't sound weird, but it probably does. Well anyway, you're very talented.

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