Wow, that's a really powerful poem. I love how you write a song about the right, moral things, unlike most other people who talk about getting revenge, you talk about how revenge is not the way. I really love that about you. and I think there should be more writers out there like you. Keep writing, you are very talented!

Sammy B.

deep...

coolies.

srz

Very deep .. i like it.

*_* wow. this is ... awesome! i love it!

rumours are for childish people with no lives.

keep writing

Nice...
the lyrics flow really well.
and I can keep a steady rhythm while I'm reading

keep it up

Wow, I love it. Great job...

Thanks for the review by the way.

M Ripley

oh i like this one. why are you so good at this? i can never write poetry. i really like the personification and the repetition of "over and under". it's kinda eerie-feeling. great job!