It gave me shivers at the end, I think it was the period. It was absolutely perfect, suddenly ending with the period. The only critique - "walls tumbles" - I think it's "wall tumbles". Other than that, excellent. :) I am currently trying to remember where the Joshua/wall tumbling down is from, because I know it's a familiar story and it's driving me crazy that I can't remember what the story is and where it's from. :)