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| IlfirinEstel 2008-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseAside from a few typos, this is pretty good. I really like the imagery you use and I love this phrase-- "the acid of the lies hidden beneath your words." |
| The Prettiest Banana 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuse**. That was.. Ohwow. Perfectly describes my situation right now.. Fu..ar out. You have such a way with words! Ahh. Simply wonderful. I adore it. bravo, bravo, bravo. |
| Michelladora 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseI really like this one. And I think I know who the inspiration was ;) |
| purple x pen 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseabsolutely brilliant as usual =) |
| meemaw 2007-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abusesee i knew u were good never think otherwise love memaw |
| say this sooner 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abusei love this. the details in your poem were fabulous. nice work! |
| Jess Angel 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI love how this talks to you. Makes me taste the tone of a kind of helplessness mixed in with acceptance and touch of bitterness at the truth. My favorite lines would have to be the first and last two lines. Nice impact. Last one especially. It takes the flutter of a heart and puts it in new and deeper lights. Thanks for the read, and keep writing! Jess 0:o) |
| deadrosepetals 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked that piece a lot. I think this is one of your best pieces. |
| je suis une pomme du terre. 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuse"The Phantom of the Chatbox!!" xDD lmao I love this... it's really really really really really [continued on page two] ...really really really good! XD The descriptions are really strong. Good job ! ~> T.H. Semper fidelis xD |