thanks 4 reviewing my poem got loads to put on but dont have the time anyway about your poem.Everytime someone falls in love its never perfect thts just the way it goes.please review more of my poems and i think your boyfriend does love you he just never acts tht way if u ever want to talk my ady is

de emoshuns in dis r so strng, dis made me cry, it makes me feel like my hrt hs been stomped on by a dinosuar n thrown in de ocean

omg lol u just got me in dis rly poetik mood, ur so inspring!!1!!

Holy Hell. I dont mean to be a jackarse. But i think you can attract better viewers if you wrote in proper english. But hey. I could slightly grasp it.

I thought it was pretty depressin. Not really dark or anything. But you got my attention that you'll hurt yourself, because of him and the fight. but hope things work out!

~thePelican.