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Obsession Changes Things
2008-09-23
ch 13,
abuseHey, Awsome story, and you write really well. First of I'm a huge hockey fan, and I'll I can say is you've done it justice, and I like how you have a quote starting off each chapter. I's creative. Anyways, onto the review. Really good story, love the emotion and all the action. Not a fan of Jay! Slime Ball! But love Al, and Connor. Just a quick question what is there major, and how old is ConnerKeep up the good work, and update soon.

~Obsession
Hop Skip Jump
2008-09-22
ch 13,
abuseFor the sake of all that is good in this world please update!
pretitiful
2008-09-08
ch 10,
abusewoohoo!
they're going out!
:)
bookwormhottie
2008-09-01
ch 13,
abuseI absolutely love this story. You're a great writter. please PMS soon.
bookwormhottie
2008-08-31
ch 2,
abuseAwesome story
bumbling-bee88
2008-08-18
ch 13,
abusehey, your a fantastic writer! your story is awesome, and beautifully written. You obviously know what your talking about with hockey, and that just makes everything ten times more real. If this were a book, not only would I buy it, but I wouldnt put it down until it was finished, and then probably go back and re-read it! please update soon!
WithoutException
2008-08-12
ch 13,
abuseGah! Don't tell me you've abandoned this now, it's getting good. Well, actually, it's been good the whole time. Thus, it would be even more of a shame if you didn't write more! This is way cool. :)
hippi926840
2008-08-10
ch 13,
abuseE
UPDATE!
jadegreen16
2008-08-04
ch 13,
abuseGreat chapter, i really like this story, it's so unique (what with the whole hockeything.) And i thoght it might not be that great because it was best cliche in the skow awards, and there not usually my thing, but its still original and unpredictable.
xxx.You.Know.You.Love.Me.xx...
2008-08-01
ch 13,
abuseNice story. Please update. Sorry im not the best at reviews
openheadspace
2008-07-28
ch 1,
abuse[He was from Canada so what else can you expect?] Rofl! Nice. I couldn't agree more wholeheartedly. ;)
sunny-raindrop
2008-07-24
ch 13,
abuseHi! Great story! I just found it and I am surprised right now 'cause I thought I started a completed one. I guess I'm wrong. I hope you update soon, it's getting exciting.
xoxokristen
2008-07-20
ch 13,
abusePlease update again soon! i love this story!
hello
2008-07-16
ch 13, anon.
abuseI started reading this today..and geez. UPDATE
bla
2008-07-11
ch 13, anon.
abuseI really love it, and can't wait for your next update

With my non amazing grammer ability i didnt see anything grammatically speaking

but it was amazing
update soon, casue that was the biggest cliff hanger EVER
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