found this story again, had read the original version, a while ago. I like the changes, and can't wait to read more. Don't worry about writing depressions I understand.

Wow great story, it's really good. Cant wait until you update which I hope is soon!

coolio. update soon? great story by the way.:D

I'm wondering if the last line is sarcasm or not... But I like this, I like the imagery. It feels like the narrator knows what s/he's talking about. Good work!

hahah I've always wanted to do that and see how many people actually read it. :) I loved this chapter. Really helped set the stage of their relationship.

aww they are so cute

I've never reviewed OTI on FP before, but I used to read it religiously when you had it posted up on Meg Cabot's messageboard/forum/thing.

I am SOO excited you've finally updated! Although I'm not sure how I feel about this new version. To me, there doesn;t seem to be a lot of differentiation between Connor and Alex's POV's. But I'm ready to be swayed by the coming chapters that I am sure will be amazing ^.~

Hey!
I was so glad to have seen this story pop up – unexpectedly- to the top of my favorites list! I had lost hope that it would be updated again, but I’m very very glad that you have not abandoned it. I love sports and love stories, and hockey is not a common one!

Can’t wait to read how the game turns out, and Im excited to read more about Alex and Connor!

Also, I just wanted to point out that about halfway through the chapter, your tenses switched and you went from past tense into present tense for a few sentences… No big deal, but I thought you might want to know!

So you have a few newer stories?… I will definitely have to check them out.

Aw, Jack's cute with his hick accent. I come from a small town in the south so his speech was like listening to people down the street. Kinda refreshing, ain't it? But yeah.

Double fake out! First, the "Oh boy! A new chapter!," quickly followed by "Darn, an author's note," and then finally "Huh? A new chapter!"

So in this version Alex actually wants to play hockey, eh? I seem to remember she spent her time happy to be on the sidelines in your earlier draft.

It's great to see an update and I can't wait to see what else is new with this story!

Okay hi, I'm a new reader. I'm very interested in this story. So I'm guessing this a Redux? Well so far it is written very well and it sounds like a good story is ahead so enlighten me:)
update soon darling:)
babyk2278!

Awesome, i love a good ice hockey story.

This looks good, love your opening and appraoch. The smell of ice at five thirty in the morning is appealing isn't? I suppose your an ice dweller of sorts? Hockey player?

Lol, Great job, will be watching this story.

Bellaria

i've read the other version but i feel like im going to love this one even more. so please do update :)

Ooh, I like this. This version seems even more promising than the last. ;) Keep it coming! :)

I really liked it great story update asap