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| Obsession Changes Things 2008-09-23 ch 13,  | abuseHey, Awsome story, and you write really well. First of I'm a huge hockey fan, and I'll I can say is you've done it justice, and I like how you have a quote starting off each chapter. I's creative. Anyways, onto the review. Really good story, love the emotion and all the action. Not a fan of Jay! Slime Ball! But love Al, and Connor. Just a quick question what is there major, and how old is ConnerKeep up the good work, and update soon. ~Obsession |
| Hop Skip Jump 2008-09-22 ch 13, | abuseFor the sake of all that is good in this world please update! |
| pretitiful 2008-09-08 ch 10, | abusewoohoo! they're going out! :) |
| bookwormhottie 2008-09-01 ch 13, | abuseI absolutely love this story. You're a great writter. please PMS soon. |
| bookwormhottie 2008-08-31 ch 2, | abuseAwesome story |
| bumbling-bee88 2008-08-18 ch 13, | abusehey, your a fantastic writer! your story is awesome, and beautifully written. You obviously know what your talking about with hockey, and that just makes everything ten times more real. If this were a book, not only would I buy it, but I wouldnt put it down until it was finished, and then probably go back and re-read it! please update soon! |
| WithoutException 2008-08-12 ch 13, | abuseGah! Don't tell me you've abandoned this now, it's getting good. Well, actually, it's been good the whole time. Thus, it would be even more of a shame if you didn't write more! This is way cool. :) |
| hippi926840 2008-08-10 ch 13, | abuseE UPDATE! |
| jadegreen16 2008-08-04 ch 13, | abuseGreat chapter, i really like this story, it's so unique (what with the whole hockeything.) And i thoght it might not be that great because it was best cliche in the skow awards, and there not usually my thing, but its still original and unpredictable. |
| xxx.You.Know.You.Love.Me.xx... 2008-08-01 ch 13, | abuseNice story. Please update. Sorry im not the best at reviews |
| openheadspace 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abuse[He was from Canada so what else can you expect?] Rofl! Nice. I couldn't agree more wholeheartedly. ;) |
| sunny-raindrop 2008-07-24 ch 13, | abuseHi! Great story! I just found it and I am surprised right now 'cause I thought I started a completed one. I guess I'm wrong. I hope you update soon, it's getting exciting. |
| xoxokristen 2008-07-20 ch 13, | abusePlease update again soon! i love this story! |
| hello 2008-07-16 ch 13, anon. | abuseI started reading this today..and geez. UPDATE |
| bla 2008-07-11 ch 13, anon. | abuseI really love it, and can't wait for your next update With my non amazing grammer ability i didnt see anything grammatically speaking but it was amazing update soon, casue that was the biggest cliff hanger EVER |