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| wishing.on.echoes 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseBleed the dream. One of my favourites I listened to them the other day for the first time in what felt like ages. I don't think 'razorblades eys' makes sense. I think you may have spelled it wrong. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abuseKnow the feeling. Well conveyed. Short but good. I understand the need to vent. |
| dress her up in fairytales 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseoh, the infinite joys of relapse. i relapsed about two months back. it was the worst relapse in my (suffering) history. but i got better thanks to my friends and my group. but oh, the first line, instantly made by eyes burn. i could just feel the acid and dang, did it sting. it goes good with "razorblades eyes". |
| poetic abortion 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseIt's the whole "rage like acid" and "razorblade eyes" that make me swoon over things like this. You know? All angry and raw and poetic--I just love it. And this is no exception. That last line and your atmosphere in this short--six lines! 18 word!--piece of anger and, I'm really about to choke on the words. Wonderful, darling. Just, so wonderful. - Noelle |