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wishing.on.echoes
2007-09-19
ch 1,
abuseBleed the dream.

One of my favourites I listened to them the other day for the first time in what felt like ages.

I don't think 'razorblades eys' makes sense.
I think you may have spelled it wrong.
smile for the sunshine
2007-07-08
ch 1,
abuseKnow the feeling. Well conveyed. Short but good. I understand the need to vent.
dress her up in fairytales
2007-06-11
ch 1,
abuseoh, the infinite joys of relapse.

i relapsed about two months back. it was the worst relapse in my (suffering) history. but i got better thanks to my friends and my group.

but oh, the first line, instantly made by eyes burn. i could just feel the acid and dang, did it sting.

it goes good with "razorblades eyes".
poetic abortion
2007-06-09
ch 1,
abuseIt's the whole "rage like acid" and "razorblade eyes" that make me swoon over things like this. You know? All angry and raw and poetic--I just love it.

And this is no exception. That last line and your atmosphere in this short--six lines! 18 word!--piece of anger and, I'm really about to choke on the words.

Wonderful, darling. Just, so wonderful.

- Noelle
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