aww... that's cute.:D

That was beautiful..

Love it but you need to stick to one tense frame.

That was such a sweet piece! I liked how it took place after the drama...great work! :)

This is, by far, my favorite story of yours, even though its only a one-shot. It's my situation I'm in (well...would be in;if we were together), except intensified. I absolutely love it.

CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE!

AW.

It says you and Mitch all over it :D

AW. Such serene descriptions. Write things like this more often!

this is definetly in my faves!

Who's Neil/

Wow, very well written. This actually reminds me of one of your stories from Quizilla? "Falling For Your Sworn Enemy..." Anyways, good job and keep writing.

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful work! I kinda wish you'd keep writing this...

it was good, but better if it keeps going

Wow!
I just noticed you really do write a bit depressing story, great, but a bit depressing :D
I'm in a hurry ( I have to iron a whole pile of clothes) so I'll be short.
I liked the theme.
I liked the story.
I liked how you used heavier but not TO heavy words (it wasn't all that simple).
I pretty much liked everything!
I liked how you used a cliché but you didn't make it to obvious (?)
Can we look forward to some more positive stories?
__Tina__

Excellent, makes me smile!