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| BurningEmbers 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abusebeautiful... missing a lover is something that we can all relate to... you captured it wonderfully. |
| bittersweet.season 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abusethe title got me instantly. and i like that this is both instense and light, the rhyme and meter is awesome. there was once a time i could write like this, but i lost it, painfully. Hold on to this. keep waiting. |
| YoungInside 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is really beautiful. And the cool part is, we have the same name. x) |
| S. Ben Beach 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseheh, i liked this one. subtle and good rhyming :) |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abuseI just wanted to leave a note saying ... I love you, Pradeep. I could wait forever and still be yours. |