beautiful... missing a lover is something that we can all relate to... you captured it wonderfully.

the title got me instantly. and i like that this is both instense and light, the rhyme and meter is awesome. there was once a time i could write like this, but i lost it, painfully. Hold on to this. keep waiting.

Wow, this is really beautiful.
And the cool part is, we have the same name. x)

heh, i liked this one.
subtle and good rhyming :)

I just wanted to leave a note saying ...

I love you, Pradeep. I could wait forever and still be yours.