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Reviews For: Waiting For The Sun

BurningEmbers
2008-06-17
ch 1,
abusebeautiful... missing a lover is something that we can all relate to... you captured it wonderfully.
bittersweet.season
2007-07-30
ch 1,
abusethe title got me instantly. and i like that this is both instense and light, the rhyme and meter is awesome. there was once a time i could write like this, but i lost it, painfully. Hold on to this. keep waiting.
YoungInside
2007-07-21
ch 1,
abuseWow, this is really beautiful.
And the cool part is, we have the same name. x)
S. Ben Beach
2007-06-15
ch 1,
abuseheh, i liked this one.
subtle and good rhyming :)
Hidden Sword of Truth
2007-06-04
ch 1,
abuseI just wanted to leave a note saying ...

I love you, Pradeep. I could wait forever and still be yours.
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