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Reviews For: Waiting For The Sun
BurningEmbers 2008-06-17 . chapter 1
beautiful... missing a lover is something that we can all relate to... you captured it wonderfully.
bittersweet.season 2007-07-30 . chapter 1
the title got me instantly. and i like that this is both instense and light, the rhyme and meter is awesome. there was once a time i could write like this, but i lost it, painfully. Hold on to this. keep waiting.
YoungInside 2007-07-21 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really beautiful.
And the cool part is, we have the same name. x)
S. Ben Beach 2007-06-15 . chapter 1
heh, i liked this one.
subtle and good rhyming :)
Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-06-04 . chapter 1
I just wanted to leave a note saying ...

I love you, Pradeep. I could wait forever and still be yours.
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