Disturbing, but Amazing.

You can almost get inside the abuser's head (which is extremely creepy, but shows what a talented writer you are!).

last line,

rocks.

i mean,

its terrible.

horrfying.

but love it.

i was reading all the books that you like and have read.

and oh my gosh, those are all my favs.

i love harry potter,

but i love Julia Anne Peters.

have you ever read Empress of the World by Sarah Ryan? If you havent you should.

or have you read the Rainbow Boy series?

They are the coolest.

seriously.

liz

Wow, chilling, but you approached the topic with a sort of dignity it seemed to me. You didnt just force out something shocking, you took the time to add the feeling. Scary, really.

oh so so so so so sadd! absolutely heartbreaking. i am in love with the way you wrote it, though. honest and real. short and concise.

Very dark... But very good. Well written... Great job.