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| Lhune 2007-06-05 ch 1,  | abusethird 'creation' of yours that I read today... and the, hm... most obscure one? (you do understand what I'm trying too say?) Never the less, it's rather fascinating. ;) toodles, Lhune |
| 00 2007-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou have brilliant ideas here, but they don't seem to have much connection to each other. You could take any of those snippets and make it a whole seperate poem, or add in lines between each piece to connect them. Try focusing on the image you want to create and keep that in mind as you write. |