"Stories of a wounded heart." That line was so full of sorrow, that I really connected with it :)

"Paper hearts." Great imagery!

third 'creation' of yours that I read today...
and the, hm... most obscure one? (you do understand what I'm trying too say?)
Never the less, it's rather fascinating. ;)

toodles,
Lhune

You have brilliant ideas here, but they don't seem to have much connection to each other. You could take any of those snippets and make it a whole seperate poem, or add in lines between each piece to connect them. Try focusing on the image you want to create and keep that in mind as you write.