HAHAHA It's fantastic!

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Ali

Hahaha brilliant! Veru cute and funny!

Making that all happen in 55 words? I liked it :)

Wow, brillaint, great, good, I loved it.

Nice little spory. (Poem/story)

Good work.

Thanks for the reviews by the way.

M Ripley

mysterious.

i love the last sentence! cool ;)

Her mouth gaping, a flush consumes her. Her breathing growing heavier, she frantically scrambles to find the button and rolls down the window.

Smacked with 70 mph winds, she closes her eyes, smiling as the wind rips through her hair.

She didn't care. It was hot in there.

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Rock on! Your short was HOT. A bit generic, but HOT. BRAVO! *smiles*

haha, i laughed so hard after the last line.

nice

55 words to convey all that? Definitely a "Great" in my book!

Brilliant is what i call it!!

I can't write kissing scenes of any length as decently as this. I couldn't imagine writing anything less than fifty-five words coming out half way as nice as this. A lovely little snapshot.

Heh, I like the last line. It's all very sweet and straight forward until the "now ex" comes into the picture, lol. Cute yet humourous!

i like it ! its good! short sweet and some what to the point lol

I loved it! Great for 55 words. That last part made me laugh. :] So its a Brilliant Great Short Story. BGSS. lol :D

'Go hide in a corner?' Try 'Go happy-dance in a corner'! This was bloody brilliant for only 55 words. Jeez.