awsome

Wow. I like how you represented them in an almost animal-esque way. Awshome. :3

-Ramen

You know, I LOVE intense poems, and you put so much feeling into your poems I can feel the intesity in almost every one! I love, love, love, love this one!! AMAZING!

~Katt

Beautiful!! u like the concepts of light and dark in your writing and thats very original... i like the concept that light and dark are equal and one can never win.
keep it up
~Triss~

I love the poem. It was great. It is true neither light nor dark truely ever win.
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