Reviews for Water Swirling Down

Catalan' 2007-07-26 ch 1,	Now this is a good haiku. I like the rhythm and phrasing. You set up the action and follow through with a related action that is delightfully visual. (Seth and Karma are structured too much like conversational speech). Give us more like Water Swirling Down. It's really a good one.
Brown Eyed Goddess 2007-06-12 ch 1,	O...Lovin' this one. I can never write haikus. This one is good. Keep up your skills.