I love reunions.

Seeing loved ones around with a mother and her newborn is always one of the more heartfelt ordeals, and I'm pretty sure you pulled it through.

Ich liebe dich!

ARS

haha i like the scene with charlie. i still don't understand, though, how he could change from being so loving to being distant to wanting to see the baby?!

=o
Ada was the girl the Mamutoi capturedd! & had the baby?! whhooaalsdfbgsdfg

uh oh...charlies back! things will definitely get interesting.

aw, i always love the way you end your chapters, and this is no exception.
what will isabelle choose?

it seems like you are building towards something big...cant wait for the next chapter =]

i love how you end your chapters, its tying up loose ends in a beautiful way

baptizing him in the river is a really good idea. its quite symbolic

this reminds me of the monomyth-you're creating an epic hero!

the title makes sense now,
i like this twist; things will most certainly get interesting

aw. this was really well written too
next chapter: the naming?

literal dreams are actually pretty scary-iv had two, and they are shocking in a way words cant describe.

aw, this was so sad. beautifully written

Very cool chapter, although I'm ready for some action!
Also, I think you should have hinted earlier, when Isabelle first got pregnant with Edan, that she had already had a baby...otherwise it's sort of like, UHHMM where did this other first child come from?!

other than that, I love it, & I love YOU!

so cute. :]
update soon!

Only five minutes till bedtime. I can hear me mum walking upstairs.

Quickly, then; very descriptive (the length was pleasing, I'll have you know). My tears are beginning to dry now, though it was hard to keep from grinning with sweetness at the little reunion between Edan and Izzy. How much I want a baby!

I'll finish the rest tomorrow. Dad's home!



~ARS