 Antilus 2007-09-19 . chapter 1Thanks for reviewing my poem; I loved this one to bits. It reminds me of a webcomic, as your the sense of humour is similar. Good job and keep up the great work :) |
 S.Y Lights 2007-08-29 . chapter 1hey. you reviewed one of my poems so first; thanks.
that's how i found you and read your poems. i love them.
so random and beautiful. |
 Elaine the lily maid 2007-06-11 . chapter 1...
Kayoh, im slow i admit it, but does this make sense to other people?? *blushing* maybe im just that slow.
would you mind explaining it? |
 kloun mannequin 2007-06-06 . chapter 1wow, amazing, I don't know, I think, this poem is funny. |
 Tytherpol 2007-06-06 . chapter 1(:
i like it. |
 Erimenthy 2007-06-05 . chapter 1Honestly, short poems usually bother me (reasonlessly), but I like this one. Its intriguing in a way, where one could immediately want to find out what happens next. In that case, you must know I think you get a general idea down well, or by how I interpret it, anyway. Thank you for the review, and keep writing! |
 fictitious facades 2007-06-04 . chapter 1The 4th line. I don't really get it. Its a short poem, and I feel there is a lot more explaining than what this poem gives. |
 Toxic.Industrial.Waste 2007-06-04 . chapter 1I usually don't like poems this short -but I liked this one. It has a lonely almost stalkerish sense to it. Great Job. |