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| RedWheeler 2007-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseIf you're wondering why I haven't reviewed this a long time ago, it was because of school. Bloody exam and final project time... so I had to wait to actually read your stuff through with a good eye. Heh. Anyways, I actually liked the end a lot. I can see it fading out quite well and I thought it wrapped up the whole theme of the song very nicely. My favourite segment was: "You know, they say it's useless... Existance for a dream. Believe, I never wanted this! Their apathy's obscene." It stuck out to me, I can't quite say why... but I really loved it. Another great job, sorry for the choppy review. |
| Mia Nicole 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseI really like this The emotion is good The words are great The whole song...is pretty awesome. Keep Writing, ~mia~ |
| thetruesaxyman 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abusewow that was realy good it had the same feel as some of my stuff. I've been there and got a closet full of t-shirts to prove it! |