If you're wondering why I haven't reviewed this a long time ago, it was because of school. Bloody exam and final project time... so I had to wait to actually read your stuff through with a good eye. Heh.

Anyways, I actually liked the end a lot. I can see it fading out quite well and I thought it wrapped up the whole theme of the song very nicely.

My favourite segment was: "You know, they say it's useless... Existance for a dream. Believe, I never wanted this! Their apathy's obscene." It stuck out to me, I can't quite say why... but I really loved it.

Another great job, sorry for the choppy review.

I really like this

The emotion is good

The words are great

The whole song...is pretty awesome.

Keep Writing, ~mia~

wow that was realy good
it had the same feel as some of my stuff.

I've been there and got a closet full of t-shirts to prove it!