Nicely done. I like this one

whoa
intense. love the possibilities that I got from reading it... "in not like, in like, in not"
-love that line. very nice, very nice. :)

I like it, it's really good, just one thing i know you did it so that every line begins with in, that's a good idea but don't let it limit you, if you think you can make the poem better by not sticking to the format you set for yourself it can work real good, like you could write a poem like you just did but then rewrite the entire thing, line by line, keep writing and thanks for the review

really cool.

I really love the vocabulary you express in this poem. Especially the word negations. (I don't really know why but that's one of my favorite words...) anyway, I like all of your work so far and hope you'll keep writing!
thanks for reviewing mine!
-eva

Avante-Garde vision. In obscurity; just like thought.