incredibly fluid from each line and stanza to the next. beautiful, sensory, gently forceful. cheers.

"Giggles tumble from her/ Mouth as pink watermelon/ Juices run off her chin and/ He licks the stream from/ Her neck and says she’s his"...Creepy.

Great poem, great imagery, all that good stuff.

Rowan.

That was kind of gross picturing someone licking watermelon juice that flowed from someone's mouth. Other than this was a good poem.

SirScott

Nice job, great use of imagery.

I loved the ending. It's so sad, but makes me want to root for her, so she does win.