|Reviews for No More Tomorrows|
| Kicking Poe 6/26/07 . chapter 1
incredibly fluid from each line and stanza to the next. beautiful, sensory, gently forceful. cheers.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 6/13/07 . chapter 1
"Giggles tumble from her/ Mouth as pink watermelon/ Juices run off her chin and/ He licks the stream from/ Her neck and says she’s his"...Creepy.
Great poem, great imagery, all that good stuff.
| SirScott 6/6/07 . chapter 1
That was kind of gross picturing someone licking watermelon juice that flowed from someone's mouth. Other than this was a good poem.
| forgetwishes 6/5/07 . chapter 1
Nice job, great use of imagery.
| DarkBlysse 6/5/07 . chapter 1
I loved the ending. It's so sad, but makes me want to root for her, so she does win.