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| Willers 2007-06-06 ch 1,   | Hey, thought I'd give you a review in return. I like this one; especially the repetition of "Anne" and "Kill it", it gives kind of a switch in perspective, a twist of insanity. I like how this flows and at the same time doesn't. I dunno what I'm saying~ |
| gold against the soul 2007-06-05 ch 1, | Darkly disturbing with some terrific imagery. I enjoyed this very much, good work. - gold against the soul |