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| Negasi 2007-06-24 ch 1,  | abusePeople have always asked me "What does your poem mean" and I could never explain it to them fully. You're right it's meant to be sampled, not necessarily understood. This poem flows really good and has a lot of good analogys (if I use the word right) It holds the essence of eternity Yet favors The flair of the times Is my favourite set of lines. Keep up the good work :) |
| DarkBlysse 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuse"It holds the essence of eternity Yet favors The flair of the times" --I love these lines. They're so original and your wording is just so creative. I like your viewpoint in this poem, and the part about how poem is not for the mind. |
| xrho 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseTrue. Good poem. |
| silverquill91 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem! especially the line "it is meant to be sampled like a rare wine," Love the image!! it is so true! Keep Writing! ~silverquill91 |