 LilLaTLuv 2007-06-18 . chapter 28Hey!
I loved this one, too. Are they going to help with the war? What will her aunt and her mother think when she reveals all she knows? DO they have a fey father? Seriously, you need an epilogue, or a sequel, or something. You have a lot of unanswered questions here.
I love this because it is nothing like the typical King Arthur story. Number one, I loved how you made it modern, without destroying the background. Number two, I love how there isn't that awful love triangle that makes you miserable throughout the book and then only makes you cry (in sadness and frustration) at the end. This was a very well written, well thought out piece. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Now, I got to go read the updated chapter of Joshua: An Artisan Mage now! Hope it's good!
Luv ya,
Tashi :) |
 Double-oh-Sneaky 2007-06-06 . chapter 28I read this story in one sitting and I have found one indomitable truth: it was *amazing*! Honestly, I loved this in its entirety, and you had me hooked from the very start.
I've added it to my favorites, and this is one of the best original works of fiction that I've read on this site! Very original and an astonishingly well-considered plot.
Well done! |