Awesome! Sorry it took me so long to review, but, like you know, I've been busy, and I did review it finally, right? I get points for that.

You took my broken ribs comment! I love that one.

I liked when Mickey was trying to fake a British accent. It's not as easy as it looks.

You're goning to kill Nathaniel?!?! I like him! He's cool!

How was Mickey able to afford a first-class ticket? That's really good for him. I wonder what'll happen when he gets to America. How much money does he have with him? Is he going to climb up the Statue of Liberty? I always wanted to do that. I wonder what kind of a job he'll get...

Great Chapter! ! ! Update Soon! ! !



Oh, and by the way, What does "Mein Gott" mean in English?

Firts of all, Les Miserables, we watched that in history class! But, I doubt I'd like the book, seeing how it's in French, which I don't speak, although I could get a translation... ANYWAYS...
The Lusitania, that's not good. Poor Mickey, he's all excited and he's boarding a ship that will lead to impening doom. Stupid German Subs.
(Do you know which way the ship actually was sunk, going to Enland, or the US? I'm not sure)
Hey! He could meet that Vanderbelt Guy! And he could be telling stories about his close call on the Titanic! That'd be kindof funny.
Just an idea, I don't realy expect you to use it, but it'd be funny, which is part of why you probably won't use it, this isn't exactly a comedy, although laughter never hurt anyone, except for the guy with broken ribs... I'm babeling. I'll stop now.
Update Soon! =D

The begining was scary, and than it was sad. I feel so bad for them. :(

As always, I love it!
I like how the room he gets is so big he can't believe he actually gets it.
I also liked the way Victor described reading.
Very good!

I see you figurd out how to make it double-space whe you hit enter.
Still very good. I like how you had Victor hinting about his father.

One suggestion: add more detail.

That's so sad :(
This story is depressing.
I Like It!

It's kindof hard to keep all the characters straight because there are so many of them, but other that that it's awesome!