 Ninjacatgirl 2009-02-07 . chapter 1I love this one alot :) |
 nia-ox 2008-09-12 . chapter 1This embodies the high school and elite world's motto exactly:
we all have to be different, we all have to stand out.
And yet we have to fit with the trend exactly, too.
Fantastic poem! |
 WinterDeity 2008-02-22 . chapter 1this poem could very much be the reason i join a nudist colony xD it's pretty kick **, i must say. anyhoo, if i could think of some constructive criticism, i'd give it to ya, but there's not really much i can say in that respect. it's fine the way it is, i think. so, yes, i s'pose i'll just stick to praising you then ^_^ AMAZERING! that is all.
~Winter~ |
 Antilus 2007-09-19 . chapter 1So, umm, brain fu*k? |
 kloun mannequin 2007-06-22 . chapter 1that makes sense, I like this line "And I could be the first to be the same" confusing but it's true what you're meaning. |
 The L1zard Queen 2007-06-20 . chapter 1This is how I feel sometimes... |
 S. Ben Beach 2007-06-18 . chapter 1Wow. Amazing. I love it how you've summed up the thought that many people have in an awesome way... You need to write more. really. |
 OnDragon'sWings 2007-06-11 . chapter 1Cool!! It's so... ugh, so awesome! [Can't think of a good enough word to describe it!!] |
 BetteNoir 2007-06-09 . chapter 1Thanks for the comment on my poem :)
I really like this poem. Your use of words is very powerful and makes a good point. You should try to get this one published. :) |
 Seventh Chords 2007-06-05 . chapter 1I think it's great, how you've managed to describe this train of thought in such a neat, yet simple manner. And it's unfortunately true for the most of us as well, I must say. Good job. |
 hey maria 2007-06-05 . chapter 1This is awesome; I love the last line, and the message in this. It expresses that feeling that so many people have, but are unwilling to admit. |
 Her Wishing Well 2007-06-05 . chapter 1Wow, interesting twist on words here, I like it. |
 Elizabeth Holopainen-Ylonen 2007-06-05 . chapter 1On first glance, this looks like it's a confusing poem. But then you realise, it's not. It's completely to the point. I like it, and the meaning behind it. Well done! |
 InViSiBlE wOmAn 2007-06-05 . chapter 1Haha this is neat, it makes me think. Great job! |