The poem is excellent, but the rhyming sceme is a little off...

the first stanza was: ABAA

Whitch is to say, the first and last lines rhymed, but the middle didn't. But excellent poem.

aww.

very cute.

and i like how everything was...pronounced, in a way.

how you explained all of the emotions.

and how you happened to 'know' what the other person was thinking/feeling the entire time.

i liked it.

:DD

A beautiful poem, very well written.