Wow. That was very creative, and very easy to relate to... well, it would have been a few years ago, but you know what I know what I mean.

I just realized that every one of the poems I've reviewed so far were put into my favorites list. You really are a great poet.

Rébecca

sounds like me and my mom

argue with mom? i can relate! good job on this, kinda short but its cool how u related arguing with a game!

Great poem. Excellent analogy.