| Reviews for Spilt Milk |
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Chidori Nadare 7/14/07 . chapter 1That's the truth, maybe there's nothing we can do about it. The only comment I have is that you should have put a comma in the first line. But that's just me, though. Nice haiku. -C.N |
a silenced revolution 6/10/07 . chapter 1I think we all know that feeling... Good haiku; my only suggestion is that you add punctuation to each line. Good work. |
Basara 6/8/07 . chapter 1that's the better idea... nice... |
The Sleepy Poet 6/5/07 . chapter 1Very, very philosophical. I like 'em short and quick. The one thing is that some sort of imagery could have been worked in, but the brilliance of this is it's simplicity. So, I would add in a bit of imagery, (showing stuff), and then that would be an excelling poem. |
forgetwishes 6/5/07 . chapter 1An excellent haiku, well done. |