Reviews for This Will All Make Perfect Sense Someday, J Mayer

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Mal 2008-04-15 ch 17, anon.	abuseThis was really a great story. and it's finished! i didn't want it to be over. i wonder, how did Mr. Kingston react to Soledad? Can't wait to read more of your stuff.
Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2008-01-31 ch 17,	abuseaaw! THAT'S SWEET!!...
Kohlomere 2008-01-31 ch 17,	abuseHaha...how cute!
lavcea 2008-01-31 ch 17,	abusewow. that was a great story. so basically lief and siren get married - she adopts soledad and they live happily ever after. great story! and thanks for keeping me entertained througout - now off to bed and get some sleep!
ParisLi 2008-01-31 ch 17,	abuseVery well done! I totally enjoyed this story and would love to read more of your work. Your characters were colorful and inventive. Great job. Thanks for finishing it!
tlw1 2008-01-31 ch 17,	abuseI really enjoyed this from beginning to (sob) end!
Kohlomere 2008-01-13 ch 16,	abuseSweet...I'm happy it's a girl. This way Siren will have to try her hand with the other side of the spectrum. Will Mr. Kingston learn about Soledad? Great job, E.
Leenaelle 2008-01-03 ch 16,	abuseWow that was a long chapter! I'm excited it's a girl, I think it will do Siren good finally being in a household with a girl, even if she is an infant. I'm glad to see their relationship is going well, and the little sister's comment about wanting Siren to be her sister forever was really really adorable! I loved the end too...made me squeal a little! I'm so excited to see what happens next!! I'm sorry to hear about your computer, and all of your sicknesses, it's so funny that your mom takes your computer away...haha. I hope you're feeling better and I am looking forward to the next chapter!
xi-love-you-x3 2008-01-03 ch 16,	abuseI love this story and i can't believe that you only have a little bit of reviews. Well for the pictures i have to say i like this leif better than the last and this new siren is gorgeous but i felt the other siren seems to fit siren better. Margot i can't stop picturing her as madison pettis. Well keep writing i love it.
i-luv-smoothies 2008-01-03 ch 1,	abuseI adore the Bravery and I love this story! Great chapter, update soon!
Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2008-01-03 ch 16,	abuseNO! WHAT HAPPENED TO HIS NEED OF MALE?! ah well, its still sweet!
Peach8321 2007-11-29 ch 15, anon.	abuseHi there, good chapter, a few things I would like clarified: Leif says "I meant what I said literally; if she would stay with me and help me care for my child, with no emotional or romantic strings attached." but then two paragraphs later: "I want to feel that calm and satisfaction every morning when I feel her weight against me waking up." This is a little confusing...does he want her as a nanny or as a girlfriend/lover? The rest of the chapter doesn't really explain it either (at least to me). quickly: "I did not feel like explain alone why I was there." should be "feel like explaining alone" Anyway hope to see more soon! (and that you had a great time shopping in NYC, lucky you!)
Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2007-11-29 ch 15,	abuseBOY BOY BOY BOY BOY BOY BOY BOY BOY BOY! how many votes is that?
Leenaelle 2007-11-29 ch 15,	abuseI love how much Siren trusts her uncle. And although, I still think the situation of living together is a bit fishy...I guess I kind of understand. What I don't understand is how he could not expect anything to happen romantically. I don't think I'd ask a girl I didn't see a future with to be a part of raising my child. That's not good for the girl...or the baby for that matter. So...I don't know, can't quite get my head around that for some reason. I'm excited for the next chapter, as I'm sure it will be pivotal! I can't believe you're almost finished with this one...must mean there are some quite jucy chapters to follow! I'm also excited to read what you've got in store next, I really enjoy your stories! Looking forward to the update!
xi-love-you-x3 2007-11-15 ch 14,	abuseI'm a new reader to this story and i love it. Can't wait til the next chapter

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