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| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseAwh! i love this! Did it win the Most Creative Plot? It should've, if it didnt :D |
| b 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseok, so she didn't realize who it was for way too long. but still! really cute, and the 'most creative plot' thing was well-deserved. i love how the story is also a small homage to literary greats and the importance of wit. congrats! |
| Dead Red 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseOk, long revie here - i think this story is incredibly well written, Abe is an incredibly relateable character and her little quirks make the story much more life-like, her bizarre thoughts are brilliantly amusing (eg. Paige the scribe), and the personification fo the dog is fab - almost more homely. I also think this could easily be made into a novel if it included more descriptions about leaving the notes for the others before Jack. I like the references to literature, TV etc, but be careful not to overuse. My only criticisms would be how rushed the ending is (I know it's supposed to be a one-shot, but this could become a truly amazing novel with a bit more development of Jack's character) and also that it's cliche plot contradicts the abstract title, as well as the quirkiness of the four main characters. However, all in all, a brilliant read, and very entertaining :) |
| atollo 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI was going to say short and sweet...but it was long. lol. Even better. This was a great one shot. Keep up the awesome writing. |
| cherrypiesizzle 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI haven't read this yet, but it sounds interesting. I'll get around to it tomorrow...the day after...sometime x) I'm sure I'll love it |
| victimofwritersblock 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseWow! Really really good! Quick witted, articulate, romantic, funny, inspirational. This story has got the whole package! Now I want to post Post-It notes around my school. Although, not for individual people... well, some will be... A message of hope is what I plan to proclaim throughout my ill-performing school. |
| IndigoAzucena 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseAt the risk of sounding like a valley girl, there is still only one way to say this: Love. It. It's so perfect WooHoo! Keep on, keepin on |
| obsesseddanni 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abusethis story is brilliant! you are an amazing writer, i admire you so so much! its so good! seriously, i read it and its twenty minutes later and im still grinning liek an idiot! you made my day :) |
| kendralyn 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseLove it!! But she is a bit dense... |
| The Whispering Wind 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseWow! Wow, wow, dang that was so good. No wonder you won for 'Most creative plot'! I definetly agree and congradulate you! Tis was such a clever storie, good,good storie! |
| Evolet Blue 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseSimply amazing, and I think that says it all. love&peace P.S. Jack rocks...had to write that :P |
| griffensgrace 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was just so cute... I know this is completely not helpful, but anyway, I really liked it, so... Um... yeah. I'm going to stop talking now before I make a fool of myself. :P |
| Secret Heart01 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseJust read this after seeing your SKOW award ... wow. WOW. Amazing. I love Neruda, I love your funny random quotes, I love Amelie, I love all the literary references and everything. Jack is cool, Abe is even cooler. This is by far the BEST one-shot fic I've ever read on this site. Thanks for a great read :) |
| Katatza 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseVery very charming! I love it! |
| Karoru-chan 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseGREAT STORY! Seriously, one of the best story I have ever read! And trust me, I read a lot, and I'm very picky! Anyways really good! And Amelie is my favorite movie ever! And I love the idea of PITW, I love it so much, that I think I may use it!! LOL Anyhow, GOOD JOB! |