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Beyond-the-Shadows
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abuseAwh! i love this! Did it win the Most Creative Plot? It should've, if it didnt :D
b
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseok, so she didn't realize who it was for way too long. but still! really cute, and the 'most creative plot' thing was well-deserved. i love how the story is also a small homage to literary greats and the importance of wit. congrats!
Dead Red
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseOk, long revie here - i think this story is incredibly well written, Abe is an incredibly relateable character and her little quirks make the story much more life-like, her bizarre thoughts are brilliantly amusing (eg. Paige the scribe), and the personification fo the dog is fab - almost more homely. I also think this could easily be made into a novel if it included more descriptions about leaving the notes for the others before Jack. I like the references to literature, TV etc, but be careful not to overuse. My only criticisms would be how rushed the ending is (I know it's supposed to be a one-shot, but this could become a truly amazing novel with a bit more development of Jack's character) and also that it's cliche plot contradicts the abstract title, as well as the quirkiness of the four main characters.
However, all in all, a brilliant read, and very entertaining :)
atollo
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseI was going to say short and sweet...but it was long. lol. Even better. This was a great one shot. Keep up the awesome writing.
cherrypiesizzle
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuseI haven't read this yet, but it sounds interesting. I'll get around to it tomorrow...the day after...sometime x) I'm sure I'll love it
victimofwritersblock
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuseWow! Really really good! Quick witted, articulate, romantic, funny, inspirational. This story has got the whole package!
Now I want to post Post-It notes around my school. Although, not for individual people... well, some will be...
A message of hope is what I plan to proclaim throughout my ill-performing school.
IndigoAzucena
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseAt the risk of sounding like a valley girl, there is still only one way to say this:
Love. It.
It's so perfect
WooHoo!
Keep on, keepin on
obsesseddanni
2008-04-25
ch 1,
abusethis story is brilliant!
you are an amazing writer, i admire you so so much!
its so good! seriously, i read it and its twenty minutes later and im still grinning liek an idiot! you made my day :)
kendralyn
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseLove it!! But she is a bit dense...
The Whispering Wind
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseWow! Wow, wow, dang that was so good. No wonder you won for 'Most creative plot'! I definetly agree and congradulate you! Tis was such a clever storie, good,good storie!
Evolet Blue
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseSimply amazing, and I think that says it all. love&peace
P.S. Jack rocks...had to write that :P
griffensgrace
2008-04-11
ch 1,
abuseThat was just so cute... I know this is completely not helpful, but anyway, I really liked it, so... Um... yeah. I'm going to stop talking now before I make a fool of myself. :P
Secret Heart01
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseJust read this after seeing your SKOW award ... wow.

WOW. Amazing. I love Neruda, I love your funny random quotes, I love Amelie, I love all the literary references and everything. Jack is cool, Abe is even cooler.

This is by far the BEST one-shot fic I've ever read on this site.

Thanks for a great read :)
Katatza
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abuseVery very charming! I love it!
Karoru-chan
2008-03-27
ch 1,
abuseGREAT STORY!
Seriously, one of the best story I have ever read!
And trust me, I read a lot, and I'm very picky!
Anyways really good!
And Amelie is my favorite movie ever!
And I love the idea of PITW, I love it so much, that I think I may use it!!
LOL
Anyhow, GOOD JOB!
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