This oneshot was...ah, I can't think of an adjective that properly describes its amazing-ness. The vocabulary was good fun and I quickly liked the characters. The plot was 110% cute and I loved every bit of it.

Wishing you the best,
-Auphora

Aw, this was cute! I really loved the ideas Abe came up with, and I love how they were turned around. And, funnily enough, the ad I was stuck with at the very bottom was a Post-It one. Go figure.

That was so cute!! i feel like I've read it before, but it was so amazing. It made me smile, and is SUCH a great distraction from studying Trig. :P

Great job!

wow, that's really creative and well written, just love the caracters so witty and funny. great job !

I am in love

Great job! One of my favorite one-shots!!

aw... cute. i like the idea of the Post-It quotes. love your story.

GREAT STORY!
:D

For one, it's creative.
Which is pretty refreshing after all the cliches.

And at least there's DEPTH in the story.
One-shots tend to lean towards either the more tragedy-ish side, or if it's romance, really fluffy.
Not that I don't like those - it's just that having something different's pretty great too. :D

That was really really nice! I don't usually read long one-shots, but your fic flowed so well, it ended before I knew it! I love the whole idea of your story. Very original. Where did you get the idea from? And y'know, just wondering, have you done anything like this in real life? I hope you reply x3

Oh, and just to make sure you get the message: Awesome one-shot, love the characters, plot and everything else. 'Specially the unique words used.

Okay, i'm in love. This story is just... perfect! I've got a smile on my face that will not abate, and i'm wandering around practically chirping with delight. People are giving me weird looks... 0.o. But really, i'm too fluffied to care.

Oh, I do like this one! My friend recommended it to me, and I'm not normally a fictionpress fan, but she thought so highly of it that I read it, and I loved it! You made the characters so great and human-like, and the quotes had me grin every time, and wow, what an idea...

Great job!

So I just read this whole story, and I thought it was so awesome that I made a fictionpress username just so that I could comment it. I've been reading stories on here for at least a year, but I've never commented them. I absolutely adored this little love story. I guess I'll have to look into the rest of your work! :)

Oh, wow! This is really good. Just, really good. Abe is such a brilliant character and it's such a sweet, original plot. I love this, this... No words to describe it. 10/10.

One of the best one-shots I have ever read. OMG I loved this :D

i. am. in. LOVE. with. this. one-shot.

fantastic job (jack made my heart skip a beat near the end. is that lame? lol)

i also thought it was very funny, because the overall wittiness of the story had me laughing the whole way through.

cute
~FO