 Auphora 2009-11-28 . chapter 1This oneshot was...ah, I can't think of an adjective that properly describes its amazing-ness. The vocabulary was good fun and I quickly liked the characters. The plot was 110% cute and I loved every bit of it.
Wishing you the best,
-Auphora |
 Cantata 2009-11-15 . chapter 1Aw, this was cute! I really loved the ideas Abe came up with, and I love how they were turned around. And, funnily enough, the ad I was stuck with at the very bottom was a Post-It one. Go figure. |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-11-02 . chapter 1That was so cute!! i feel like I've read it before, but it was so amazing. It made me smile, and is SUCH a great distraction from studying Trig. :P
Great job! |
 melaniedreams 2009-11-02 . chapter 1 wow, that's really creative and well written, just love the caracters so witty and funny. great job ! |
 decadebydecade 2009-10-17 . chapter 1I am in love |
 JenRad11 2009-10-06 . chapter 1Great job! One of my favorite one-shots!! |
 ghurl00 2009-09-29 . chapter 1aw... cute. i like the idea of the Post-It quotes. love your story. |
 ir0nna 2009-09-24 . chapter 1GREAT STORY!
:D
For one, it's creative.
Which is pretty refreshing after all the cliches.
And at least there's DEPTH in the story.
One-shots tend to lean towards either the more tragedy-ish side, or if it's romance, really fluffy.
Not that I don't like those - it's just that having something different's pretty great too. :D |
 ChocoResha 2009-08-29 . chapter 1That was really really nice! I don't usually read long one-shots, but your fic flowed so well, it ended before I knew it! I love the whole idea of your story. Very original. Where did you get the idea from? And y'know, just wondering, have you done anything like this in real life? I hope you reply x3
Oh, and just to make sure you get the message: Awesome one-shot, love the characters, plot and everything else. 'Specially the unique words used. |
 Feonixis 2009-08-19 . chapter 1Okay, i'm in love. This story is just... perfect! I've got a smile on my face that will not abate, and i'm wandering around practically chirping with delight. People are giving me weird looks... 0.o. But really, i'm too fluffied to care. |
 roughdiamond5 2009-08-11 . chapter 1Oh, I do like this one! My friend recommended it to me, and I'm not normally a fictionpress fan, but she thought so highly of it that I read it, and I loved it! You made the characters so great and human-like, and the quotes had me grin every time, and wow, what an idea...
Great job! |
 cheeseheadinct 2009-08-01 . chapter 1So I just read this whole story, and I thought it was so awesome that I made a fictionpress username just so that I could comment it. I've been reading stories on here for at least a year, but I've never commented them. I absolutely adored this little love story. I guess I'll have to look into the rest of your work! :) |
 Little Bluebirds 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Oh, wow! This is really good. Just, really good. Abe is such a brilliant character and it's such a sweet, original plot. I love this, this... No words to describe it. 10/10. |
 AsianFlipGurl 2009-07-29 . chapter 1One of the best one-shots I have ever read. OMG I loved this :D |
 FunkyObsessed 2009-07-13 . chapter 1i. am. in. LOVE. with. this. one-shot.
fantastic job (jack made my heart skip a beat near the end. is that lame? lol)
i also thought it was very funny, because the overall wittiness of the story had me laughing the whole way through.
cute
~FO |