Awh! i love this! Did it win the Most Creative Plot? It should've, if it didnt :D

ok, so she didn't realize who it was for way too long. but still! really cute, and the 'most creative plot' thing was well-deserved. i love how the story is also a small homage to literary greats and the importance of wit. congrats!

Ok, long revie here - i think this story is incredibly well written, Abe is an incredibly relateable character and her little quirks make the story much more life-like, her bizarre thoughts are brilliantly amusing (eg. Paige the scribe), and the personification fo the dog is fab - almost more homely. I also think this could easily be made into a novel if it included more descriptions about leaving the notes for the others before Jack. I like the references to literature, TV etc, but be careful not to overuse. My only criticisms would be how rushed the ending is (I know it's supposed to be a one-shot, but this could become a truly amazing novel with a bit more development of Jack's character) and also that it's cliche plot contradicts the abstract title, as well as the quirkiness of the four main characters.

However, all in all, a brilliant read, and very entertaining :)

I was going to say short and sweet...but it was long. lol. Even better. This was a great one shot. Keep up the awesome writing.

I haven't read this yet, but it sounds interesting. I'll get around to it tomorrow...the day after...sometime x) I'm sure I'll love it

Wow! Really really good! Quick witted, articulate, romantic, funny, inspirational. This story has got the whole package!

Now I want to post Post-It notes around my school. Although, not for individual people... well, some will be...

A message of hope is what I plan to proclaim throughout my ill-performing school.

At the risk of sounding like a valley girl, there is still only one way to say this:

Love. It.

It's so perfect

WooHoo!

Keep on, keepin on

this story is brilliant!

you are an amazing writer, i admire you so so much!

its so good! seriously, i read it and its twenty minutes later and im still grinning liek an idiot! you made my day :)

Love it! But she is a bit dense...

Wow! Wow, wow, dang that was so good. No wonder you won for 'Most creative plot'! I definetly agree and congradulate you! Tis was such a clever storie, good,good storie!

Simply amazing, and I think that says it all. love&peace

P.S. Jack rocks...had to write that :P

That was just so cute... I know this is completely not helpful, but anyway, I really liked it, so... Um... yeah. I'm going to stop talking now before I make a fool of myself. :P

Just read this after seeing your SKOW award ... wow.

WOW. Amazing. I love Neruda, I love your funny random quotes, I love Amelie, I love all the literary references and everything. Jack is cool, Abe is even cooler.

This is by far the BEST one-shot fic I've ever read on this site.

Thanks for a great read :)

Very very charming! I love it!

GREAT STORY!

Seriously, one of the best story I have ever read!

And trust me, I read a lot, and I'm very picky!

Anyways really good!

And Amelie is my favorite movie ever!

And I love the idea of PITW, I love it so much, that I think I may use it!

LOL

Anyhow, GOOD JOB!