How about...WOW and BRILLIANT? d:)

[They wear matching wedding bands.] My favorite line EVER! xD This was so incredibly cute. Love your style.

;)becky

It almost has a poetic nature about it. Very cute. I like it. You definitly have your own style.
I'll give it a... hm... Brilliant? Great, by all means, but it might just reach the Brilliant level. Cute.

Lol. You did another one! Lol. Cute! ^_^

Very cute.

Go hide in a corner...JK! I just wanted to say that. You're so clever with this. I could never write a story in 55 words or less. So, my answer is BRILLIANT! (and WoW). Great job. I hope you post more like this.

Brilliant.
yay!

go hide in a corner! joking ;)

ok this style is different. i cant say that i especially like the style but i like how u used it. u made it sweet with a little of longing at the end. it's also mysterious!! really good.

Oh ehm gee! You came up with another one and they're both GBSS. Thats what it is. Lol. xD No wait they're SGBSS. SuperGreatBrilliantShortStory. :D

Great!

aw. Cute! Heh, something that has ALWAYS bothered me is when couples stop showing each other affection as soon as they have kids. I'm glad these two don't!