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Swii 2007-12-02 . chapter 1
NO! Inconclusive! Give me more. ;_;

Again, lovely descriptions and lovely details. I especially enjoyed the "feet first" comment in here. Also how they were studying Pride and Prejudice. Another reason why she tossed the first title was because another book was published under that title: First Impressions.

At one point you spelled "Bingley" as "Bingely" but I couldn't really find anything else that was off.

This was a lovely story, and the voices were very realistic. I'm just a bit sad that the story is inevitably a sad one. Do Caleb and Addie get a happy ending?

You feel how much Addie was in a way dependent on Caleb emotionally. And Caleb feels the same way, but only academically. Addie gets used, but he sticks around out of TWU WUV.

Um, ahem. Ignore my shoddy interpretation.
Esquirella 2007-06-06 . chapter 1
I like this clever mix of characters.
Rooftops 2007-06-06 . chapter 1
Very interesting. Hoping to see more of it soon, would be a shame not to! I am enjoying both Caleb and Addie, and their interaction
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