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SapphireEyes16
2008-08-24
ch 2,
please update soon!
SapphireEyes16
2008-01-06
ch 1,
luv the story so far keep updating!
SapphireEyes16
2007-07-12
ch 5,
aww the white rose is such a sweet idea, and the poem fits as well, so update soon!
Haybay smartie
2007-07-02
ch 5,
oo! i like the white rose idea. and the line of a poem that came with it was perfect. definatly add more poetry in the chapters to come. poetry helps to put more feeling into the story. well... update soon!
Whoaa Kayy.
2007-06-27
ch 5,
haha i dont think you did, it kinda goes with all families...they say that they dont like eachother but they love eachother anyway, mabye you did give something away...i'm not sure, your the one writing it! lol ok well update soon!
-Rad Like Whoaa.
mia5081
2007-06-27
ch 5,
hehe, i think glade is going to get an interesting surprise when he finds out paul isn't really interested in...the same gender lol
update soon!
~mia
SecretWhispers
2007-06-24
ch 5,
If they are invited over for dinner, her life sucks even more. Great chapter! Update!
complexdays
2007-06-23
ch 5,
'REALLY? What's his name? Where does he live? I NEED to find him! gives puppy dog eyes Please! Introduce us!'

ahah! Maybe I will introduce ^.* He's in denial.. but It's Okay! 'cause me and my friends are trying to show him the good side of liking guys.
'See?! Isn't he so hot?!'
'Oh my god, GAG!'
That's the progress so far, however. >< Thanks for updating and that is that! ^^ (His name is Matt, by the way.)
Insane plus Insomniac makes...
2007-06-23
ch 5,
Your brother doesn't like girls? *nods skeptically* And exactly why not? Lack of time doesn't generally bother most boys. I love this! Update, please!
ObliviousLady
2007-06-23
ch 5,
Haha. I would fully support you if you decided to beat up your brother for that. How much older is your brother?

Anyways, what's going on with the white rose and the note? I'm really dying to know. It's just oh so sweet and mysterious. Lol. And Glade with his puppy dog eyes definitely sounds irresistable... But I can't wait for more Paul.

This chapter definitely leaves me wanting more, so update soon.
runningXwithXtheXwerewolves
2007-06-23
ch 5,
I would die if I got a rose in my locker...I would actually freak out alittle...anyway...that dinner's going to be just a tad awkward. I liked the chapter!! UPDATE SOON! :P
kstar129
2007-06-23
ch 5,
hm...How old is your brother?Depending on how old he is,and the fact that this is a BOY we're talking about I find the whole girls take up too much time comment unbeleivable.And does he have a journal/Diary or whatever?If he does read it!It would be awesome!And try to keep stuff he can blackmail you with down to a minimum.Then blackmail him to the extreme!Anyway awesome story!Make more SOON!
SapphireEyes16
2007-06-16
ch 4,
i really lyke ur story and i just luv neva's character(spillin harmful chemicals on her ex tht's just brilliant!) keep up the updates!
psychotic blake lover
2007-06-15
ch 3,
Okay, so I don't think you have any errors here. Great job! :) Well, the plot's getting more interesting day by day. And now that Paul's here, everything's getting so much more fun. So good luck to your next chapters! :D
psychotic blake lover
2007-06-15
ch 2,
Glade, our other best friend, greeted, slinging one arm over each of out shoulders.

I think you've got a typo there. our instead of our. :)

Gladwyne. That's a really unique name. And I like it. Hahah. Oh, and he's gay? Or is he just making fun of himself?

‘Good morning kids!’ My Chemistry teacher exclaimed excitedly.

I think My should just be my. :)

AWW! Well, isn't that adorable! The main guy now enters the story officially! Woot! This was another great chapter. I think you're improving chapter by chapter. Your conversations are smooth and entertaining. Great job!
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