Wow. I love the line "Thoughts don't take up much space." I love the whole thing. It's one of those poems that makes you shiver when you read the last line. Awesome, I'm adding it to my favourites. And thanks for the review! :)

This is interesting. I especially like the next to last stanza. Keep writing.

of all your poems i've read, this one i favor most. it reminds me a little of my own personal experiences, but then again, it's like something from an independant movie or a bright eyes song. anyway, the first and last lines are my favorite, and again it's because it reminds me of something. i like this one a lot, so i'm going to add it to my favorites. you should write more like this, even though your other poems are enjoyable in themselves.

I like it. That seriously *doesn't* belong in a vat of rats' eyes. :D