Good piece.

Twilight Starr

I loved the ending, great work!

Kristie Marie

:D I still love those last lines (what is with me and last lines? heehee): "there was a butterfly resting on your window, it looked like it was dead, but, suddenly, the feeling flew to the skies"

Good job! :)

This explains perfectly how I feel right now. I love it when I can relate to poems -even if its a downer.

The lines:

"you stroked my hair before walking away

I can't believe that I cried a tear for you"

Is very, very true to me.

Beautiful. The ending is great.