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| xrho 2007-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem. Loved the formatting, especially in "it’s always (so complicated for us)". |
| Ashelin 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. It depicted wonderful emotions, and the last line was so perfect. Throughout the questioning there is always that defining feeling. It was very good. Great job. |