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School's out
Susurrus
2007-06-16 . chapter 1
Very true, the followed format of the words with exclamation marks even with words like 'regret' make it suitably ironic.Well done!
ecwix
2007-06-07 . chapter 1
It almost sounds like a song/chant. I just got out about half an hour ago, so I can really relate with this right now. :p
The Reverse Edge Blade
2007-06-06 . chapter 1
I liked this! The way you described your feelings with those short verses gave the poem a nice tune! I liked how you made it a reminder as well as your own feelings. Keep at it and write more!
The Reverse Edge Blade
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