FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| ayadora 2007-10-26 ch 1,  | abuseI wasn't gonna review, but yo. Wow. People really didn't like this. Well--I laughed. The iron fist bit was funny. But I mean, I've turned stuff like this in, and I just laugh, because teachers deserve to be made fun of. Especially for assigning what are sad, badly disguised book reports. |
| Anon 2007-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseIf you would like to learn something about writing humor and/or satire, I would suggest you begin with Swift and work your way forward. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abusehaha I love it. (I didn't like To Kill a Mockingbird at all when I read it a few years ago. Terrible, but. Nice usage of Muse.) |
| Je-Nie-Dieu 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abusePraise Payne. |
| Will 2007-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseGuys, it's called a joke. You should try to spend less time critically analyzing a joke as something serious and spend more time laughing. |
| The Nights Wing 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseUmm, no offense, but did you make half of this up. Atticus IS Jem and Scout's father, not their uncle, and I'm pretty sure their is nothing about Jem's name being spelled wrong. I'm pretty sure it's short for something, although right now I'm too lazy to go look that up. Plus...since when was Atticus born in an Attic, and in possession of an iron hand? No offense, but... |
| hey maria 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseDid you really turn this in? Really, what is the point of doing that? I mean, if you didn't want to write the report, you could have just not written anything at all, instead of taking the time to write something as painfully un-funny and pointless as this. |
| anonymous 2007-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI take it you didn't pass. You could have really done better. Consider spending more time on future projects, proofreading, editing and combining sentences. Also, try to analyze, not just list. |