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| Pierce Alexander 2008-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseA passage of ten thousand words could not do this poem does. It gives the reader an image of someone who is hurt by society, so in an attempt to break away from society, they choose not to hurt anyone but themselves. This sort of image is very prevalent in our every day lives, but this poem documents it more vividly than real life, if I could be so bold to say so. |
| somuchformyhappyending 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this poem, but it sort of scared me in the sense that it is pretty much EXACTLY what I'm going through right now. and you only used 7 short lines to do it. (I might've counted wrong though 'cause it's 3 AM...hah...) anyways, great job. and this might be weird but if you ever wanna talk then you can just message me or email me or something. okay, that DID sound a little odd, but I'm serious. if you need to. :) great job again. |
| karatekid369 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseShort, bitter sweet, and to the point. |
| Damned Soul Of Chaos 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abusei kut myself 2 so i understend i kno how it feelz i luvdis poem itz awesome! plz r&r my poems plz! |