Review Game!

-Flow
...The flow was good. The line breaks are very well placed.

-Technical Aspects
...I couldn't figure out why you capitalized Resplendent because that just didn't make sense. Also the second line should have a period after it. Also from A sign of rebirth to forever will last is a runon sentence. Also the last four lines I might get rid of an and and make it into two sentences.

-Descriptions/images
...well it's kinda hard to describe a phoenix in different ways, but you did a pretty good job with the baby's breath line and dew from the grass. Those were both really great

-Word choice
...plumage resplendent was really great and the rest of them were pretty ordinary, but not in a bad way

-Enjoyment
...I liked it a lot. It was about the same thing, but not too repetitive and the descriptions kept my attention.

-Poetic Devices
...the rhyming pattern was all over the place in the beginning. It was A-A-A-B-C-C-B-B. I might work on that maybe make the third line rhyme with again... that should fix it. Also the told part did seem a bit forced to begin with.

-Subject
...The subject matter is a bit overused and because of that some of it was a bit cliched, but as I said you had some really great descriptions and that made it different and well done.

damn u sure know how to write a good poem. this wasn;t good. it was freakin great. wow. i think i just found my favorite author. i wouldn't be surprise if u won a price for this. lol. anywayz i love the poeam and good jub. i will be readin more of you storys n poem.

This is a beautiful poem- I love the imagery... you have such a fabulous style!
Nice work.
Erisah