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| Kyllex of Darkness 2008-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseOh my god! That was freaking adorable! I loved it. A lot. Man, Ryan is a dork. I can't believe he didn't figure out she was talking about him! Haha. Well that was super duper amazing and cute, kudos to you! :D Loved it! |
| Jennifer.xx 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abusei like it. it's cute. great job. ^-^ Jennifer.xx |
| l0v3abl3 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseAw. That was swet. Loved it. |
| Tetelestai 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseahaha this was pure excellentness! I loved the part where she talks about being in love with someone, and he has NO CLUE that it's him. Torture is hilarious. :) Good job! |
| VanessaJ325 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abusereally love this one shot it was really good... ive seen on a ocuple pplz favorite so i thought i should read it but it was actually really good! lol |
| EnChAnTeD-KoReAn 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abusethat is so unbelievably sweet. kudos to you! good job |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseawh...thats cute- i love the little rant and how he never got who she was meaning! :D |
| his post-it jokes. 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseaww. aww. aww. aww. aww. aww. hah, i dnt think i'll ever stop saying aww. :) nice last sentence. :D |
| Smiling Serenade 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseAw! Just so sweet. (: They were both blinded by their own love. Haha. Amazing little story. |
| jet.and.bobsy 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseI love your one-shots! :] |
| teagarden 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThis story is incredibly cute. Awesome job! |
| FizzyLizzy 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseOMG! this is by far one of my favourite stories! i absolutely LOVE your dialogue! grr.. where can i get an imagination like that. haha. you've officially made me despise kaia... for simply having ryan. I WANT HIM! BE REAL! STUPID WORLD! there are absolutely no... REPHRASE: there are about 1/10 guys in the world who are like that. hmph. i still love your one shots though! but i'd love you two write an actual book story! it'd be so awesome. i'm a sucker for cliché. =) |
| found.eventually 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI love the way the story flowed and how it managed to make MY heart race when Kaia's heart raced, smile at Kaia's sillier, goofier inner ramblings, and sigh happily towards the end. The happy ever after. Loved it, really. Screw this, who wants anything else when you get sweet cliche? :) |
| Ninavs 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseOMG! This was...Breathtakingly Sweet! Loved it! |
| Undercover Romantic 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseThis story made me giggle. I love it! And it's kinda sad that I can completely see some guy being that oblivious. Idiots. Can't live with em, can't live without em. ;p |