| Reviews for Breathtakingly Gorgeous |
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Racquel 10/8/10 . chapter 1 SO ROMANTIC! :') |
hw.hurts.trees 9/20/10 . chapter 1that is epically cute. :3 i love your stories :) |
aerina 8/22/10 . chapter 1How cute! My heart ached in this! :) The whole 'like him yet hate him'... I've been there myself so I could relate! :D |
sdyedanney 7/30/10 . chapter 1ONE OF MY FAVE FICS! |
entertwiningvines 7/29/10 . chapter 1cute. well written. it made me smile :) |
sweven 7/12/10 . chapter 1'twas real good :) I liked the usual (girl protagonist with a slight snarky attitude). The guy being completely oblivious was a nice touch to prolong the story. |
Rooffoo 7/10/10 . chapter 1Ah I love this. I've re read it so many times and I still love it. She's such a sadist teasing him like that but I love her for it. |
elma 7/9/10 . chapter 1I love one shots! So don't worry :D Just the thing I'm realising about them... that they are so... predictable... like all the main heroine characters act like its the end of the world, they are overly dramatic, rude etc yet there's this super hot/popular/smart/sporty/EVERYTHING guy out there who likes her (and probably has for a while) It just... doesn't happen in real life? y'know? but I do love imagining it and therefore i'm going to favourite this story because i love characters like her who have wit LOL |
Natasha Dust 7/8/10 . chapter 1That was lovely... :D Normally, I wouldn't like it if a girl 'played' with a guy like that after he just confessed... But this truly suited them! *lol* It was perfect in every way... in my opinion! ;D |
queenjade 5/31/10 . chapter 1This is deffinatly one of my favourite one shots, if not my favourite :) I read it ages ago but forgot to favourite it so i couldnt find it again :( But you left a review on my story so i thought id check out your work and BINGO i found it :) I re-read it and ..just..WOW :D Kai's brilliant..she's feisty,funny and can easily hold her own (a nice change) As for Ryan? I LOVE HIM! :) he's so funny and sweet aww i just love him (did i say that already?) Best line ever..."I liked him. It was simple and complicated as that." that just sums up the majority of relationships in one line. so glad i found this again :) Jade xoxo |
blackblasphemy 5/30/10 . chapter 1This made me all gooey, grinning like some crazy woman. I really don't have any "and/or tips for improvement.", because this is so heartwarming and sweet and wonderful and kinda sad how stupid jealous guys are. |
x Farii 5/6/10 . chapter 1Bahahah! LOVED how she kept him in the dark :P |
ForeverInfinity 5/3/10 . chapter 1Ryan was insulting himself ;). This story was so... awesome! My vocab has been halved from the greatness of this. The ending made me smile so hard, I put my hand over my mouth so my brother won't think I'm some kind of psycho.. -ForeverInfinity |
CallMeAutumn 4/13/10 . chapter 1THIS WAS SO SWEET! |
Dead Deactivated 4/9/10 . chapter 1Cute! It would be even nicer if you made this into a actuall Novella or story thing |