Really beautiful, vivid imagery. I've hit a rough spot with religion, and yet your words manage to have the emotion that can still reach me in certian reflection. I love the format of the whole piece, but the two most striking lines, to me, were "Your love the water/Your blood the soap" because it is the connecting point of the whole poem. Wonderful write. Keep writing, k.

I liked it. There are a few too many anti-religious works on this site (heh, even though I s'pose I'm sort-of guilty), and not enough of works like this. Good job. :)