In a word that was strange. It was neat how she talked to herself. Still the question has to why she been kidnapped hasn't been answered. The summary suggests that she might be freed. Update soon.

~SirScott

Aw, poor Tess. But it seems like she's about to rescued, even if they're going to come after her again. Please update soon! :)

Aww, I feel so bad for Tess! Please update soon! :)

That was interesting beginning. It does make me wonder why she was kidnapped and what will be her fate. Good beginning. Please update soon.

~SirScott