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| Meursault 2007-06-08 ch 1,  | abuseI TOTALLY know the feeling. |
| soft-spoken 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abusevery nice. |
| PessimisticOptimism 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was very deep. I especially like the line: "I know my scream is music to you." I feel like you could avoid saying "I know" as a way to make your words flow better. However, that is no more than what I feel. Feel free to take it or leave it. It's a good poem nonetheless. |