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| ValkyreFF 2008-06-25 ch 3, | abuseOMG! This story is so cute! I love it. You have to update! I'll update mine if you update yours... =] I think that sounds fair. ~Val |
| Back of Beyond 2007-09-10 ch 3, | abuseGreat story so far, can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Orangeena 2007-06-17 ch 3, | abuseVery interesting beginning! I like the fact that there is still so much we've yet to learn about the main characters. I hope we find out more soon. I like the cross POV scenes, but my only suggestion would be to summarize a bit more with the second POV to make it smoother, just because it seems a bit redundant to read the same exact scene over again. Although, you have done a great job expressing the separate thoughts of Sam and Calvin in each situation. I can't wait for more! And to find out what exactly Sam meant by 'coffee like you'.. I'm guessing it's something to do with the tall, light hair thing... we shall see! |
| DannyDangerous 2007-06-11 ch 3, | abuseAmazingly cute, Can' wait to read more. -Danny |
| Eternity's Ink 2007-06-11 ch 3, | abuseThis story is fabulous! I can't wait for more! |
| SerialXLain 2007-06-11 ch 3, | abuse*gasp* A fishy(?) past and a mysterious medical history!? You have me hooked. :P Sam's thoughts are hilarious. I love how sarcastic and rude he is... xD And I'm sure you're brother wouldn't mind you using him if he knew that people here on FP liked it. :P People do the song thing all the time here on FP. Just give credit to the artist at the end of the chapter in you AN or something so it doesn't look like you're stealing. ^^ xo |
| Esquirella 2007-06-11 ch 3, | abuseI'm pretty sure Sam could sue his boss for firing him for whatever it was he found out. That was so not coo! What's he taking pills for? |
| Amindaya 2007-06-11 ch 3, | abuseAw. Cute. I'm glad their date went okay even though Calvin didn't really have the tickets. The guy fired him? How mean. Makes me wonder even more what's wrong with Sam, though. |
| SerialXLain 2007-06-08 ch 2, | abuseHaha... This chapter got even cuter. There's nothing like someone confusing another's gender... xD And I love the...almost running from Brea part. Wow. Nice chapter ending. No tickets? Ha! *shakes head* xo |
| Esquirella 2007-06-07 ch 2, | abuseI did, indeed, appreciate the quick update! It's a really cute story and I'm enjoying it! |
| Amindaya 2007-06-07 ch 2, | abuseI've never seen 'Eww' spelled 'Iuw' in my entire life. It makes me so happy for some reason that it's spelled that way...I don't know why. :D You kind of make it sound like he gets six pizzas and six drinks for twenty dollars. Because before he goes, he says he finds twenty dollars, and then later he says he pays for everyone. And that is just...insane. Breanna is a character that I'm going to love to hate, I can tell already. I like that he was interested even when he thought she was a girl. They're both so adorable awkward...and what Calvin offers about the premier makes me have a giggle attack. But I love him anyways. :D Can't wait for more. I'm glad you update so quickly. :D |
| Esquirella 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseAwesome start! I want more! |
| Amindaya 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseLOVE it. Such a dorky thing to say, 'I can make coffee like you.' So awkward...which makes me just love him, right away. And I like how he's so observant, that he thought to look for the graduating year on the jacket and everything. :D Please continue, and soon. You've got me hooked! Great first chapter. |
| SerialXLain 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseCoffee like you, eh? Cute. Very cute and now I'm eagerly waiting for more. :D Welcome to (at least posting on?) FP. :) xo |